I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, July 2, 2019
Thursday, June 13, 2019
Thursday, June 6, 2019
Saturday, May 18, 2019
the ladybug
Wiki 2 Wāhanga 2 Writing starter
The ladybug.
I see a lot of things like Ladybugs and LEGO man the LEGO man is my brothers toy.
He created a photo.I want to create one. My mum said no so i was sad i went in to
mine and katene’s grrr.I want Nothing for dinner because I wasn't hungry I slept
on the floor. I Woke up in the forest I was Scared. There was a lot of Ladybugs.
It looks like i was there queen. I was. I went to my house. My Mum said what happened to
you april. I said nothing and yes i’m ok.”Are you sure. Yes mum and mum i’m a queen now.
What were are you going now. Mum its ok. Ok i l-love you. Me to mum bye. Bye
=(. 10 Years later I wonder if my mum is ok and my brother i will go to my mums
house. Hi mum. Hi april are you ok. Yes and mum Where is katene. he's in his Room
he said because you left for. 10 years so you shirt talk for 10ms ok. Ok mum hi katene.
Sis are you there. yes. Are you ok. Yes are you sad. No wye you are bake now dos
He created a photo.I want to create one. My mum said no so i was sad i went in to
mine and katene’s grrr.I want Nothing for dinner because I wasn't hungry I slept
on the floor. I Woke up in the forest I was Scared. There was a lot of Ladybugs.
It looks like i was there queen. I was. I went to my house. My Mum said what happened to
you april. I said nothing and yes i’m ok.”Are you sure. Yes mum and mum i’m a queen now.
What were are you going now. Mum its ok. Ok i l-love you. Me to mum bye. Bye
=(. 10 Years later I wonder if my mum is ok and my brother i will go to my mums
house. Hi mum. Hi april are you ok. Yes and mum Where is katene. he's in his Room
he said because you left for. 10 years so you shirt talk for 10ms ok. Ok mum hi katene.
Sis are you there. yes. Are you ok. Yes are you sad. No wye you are bake now dos
mum now you are hare. Yes i love you brother. Me to april can you sady april. N-no.
wye. I need to go some where. O-ok but can i come and mum if she wants to come.
yope . mum wan do you get here. Ummmmm but can i come april. O-ok =). What are
we going to april? Do you wasn’t to now. N-no. ok come on mum and katene. Ok.
thank you for reading my story have a nice day.
wye. I need to go some where. O-ok but can i come and mum if she wants to come.
yope . mum wan do you get here. Ummmmm but can i come april. O-ok =). What are
we going to april? Do you wasn’t to now. N-no. ok come on mum and katene. Ok.
thank you for reading my story have a nice day.
Friday, May 3, 2019
the travellers
this week we have been learning how to create a create a piece of writing using a picture to help us.First we had a class brainstorm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. Finally we started our writing . I am sharing it with you ,please leave a comment. Thanks!
Think about using your senses. Smell, taste, hear, feel, see.
Remember to use correct punctuation and spelling.
Remember to use similes, and adjectives.
Use correct sentences.
I can see burnt logs and i can smell smoke, it look like trees to me. One of the trees
started falling. There is a bridge there i went into the water i can see a lot of things there
like fishing and sharks i was cold when i come Out of water brrrrrrrrr. i see a person there
i do not like it fine can i be your friend yes. you can. lets go to md’s ok. Then come on.
what is your name. Arabella. I like that name and my name is april. We jumped in the
water we were playing a game in the water the game was holding the breath
longer. I winShe had a little sister and brother well I had a older brother
he is 9 One day me and arabella went to the beach with my mum and dad
we had fun me and Arabella went to the deepest end I can't breathe then my dad came
and got me I was safethen we had fish chips for dinner and then She
want to have a sleepover Then then we had a pillow fight with Mum and Dad katene
don't want to me Arabella and Dad and Mum Matt's katene with the
pillow He looked like a chicken hahahahahahahahaha we woke up and then we had breakfast
pancakes r it was yummy then I arabella wanted to have one more We had pancakes for
breakfast it was yummy Then we dropped arabella at home. I went to arabella
house she has 2 dogs i’m Scared. She said it ok april.Ok. Her brother is mean
to me well i went into the room it is messy but I cleaned it up.
It was all tidy. Me and Arabella had McDonald's for tonight I
went up the bunk bed with arabella. Samuel and Madilyn went in the
bed. I Had a nightmare. I was cold.I didn't
want to wake arabella up and I couldn't sleep. .It was the morning.
Arabella said are you ok. Yes i’m ok. Are you Sure. yes. Ok ok ok. And its my
Birthday today. Ooo Happy Birthday april. I’m 9. Yeah and do
you know its my birthday. Happy Birthday Arabella. Now i’m 10. Yay
Let's go to McDonald's I have some money in my pockets. how much do you have.
100647474. How can you have that much in your pocket TELL ME NOW. no ok. Ok but do you
now Where is Samuel and Madilyn are. No. Oh no we Need to find them. Ok. we
started falling. There is a bridge there i went into the water i can see a lot of things there
like fishing and sharks i was cold when i come Out of water brrrrrrrrr. i see a person there
i do not like it fine can i be your friend yes. you can. lets go to md’s ok. Then come on.
what is your name. Arabella. I like that name and my name is april. We jumped in the
water we were playing a game in the water the game was holding the breath
longer. I winShe had a little sister and brother well I had a older brother
he is 9 One day me and arabella went to the beach with my mum and dad
we had fun me and Arabella went to the deepest end I can't breathe then my dad came
and got me I was safethen we had fish chips for dinner and then She
want to have a sleepover Then then we had a pillow fight with Mum and Dad katene
don't want to me Arabella and Dad and Mum Matt's katene with the
pillow He looked like a chicken hahahahahahahahaha we woke up and then we had breakfast
pancakes r it was yummy then I arabella wanted to have one more We had pancakes for
breakfast it was yummy Then we dropped arabella at home. I went to arabella
house she has 2 dogs i’m Scared. She said it ok april.Ok. Her brother is mean
to me well i went into the room it is messy but I cleaned it up.
It was all tidy. Me and Arabella had McDonald's for tonight I
went up the bunk bed with arabella. Samuel and Madilyn went in the
bed. I Had a nightmare. I was cold.I didn't
want to wake arabella up and I couldn't sleep. .It was the morning.
Arabella said are you ok. Yes i’m ok. Are you Sure. yes. Ok ok ok. And its my
Birthday today. Ooo Happy Birthday april. I’m 9. Yeah and do
you know its my birthday. Happy Birthday Arabella. Now i’m 10. Yay
Let's go to McDonald's I have some money in my pockets. how much do you have.
100647474. How can you have that much in your pocket TELL ME NOW. no ok. Ok but do you
now Where is Samuel and Madilyn are. No. Oh no we Need to find them. Ok. we
found them.
Monday, February 18, 2019
100 WC Week 1
WALT use a picture prompt to write 100 words.
The Statue.
It looks like a war to me there are red and purple and blue, white, green and orange people.
The heads are all red and there are 3 blue bodies and there are 2 white bodies.
1 red statue looks like a human. There are 3 trees and there is 1 white person.
All of the hair are in a bun except for 1.
The heads are all red and there are 3 blue bodies and there are 2 white bodies.
1 red statue looks like a human. There are 3 trees and there is 1 white person.
All of the hair are in a bun except for 1.
1 red person is wearing a hat. There are a lot of red person and heads. There are water there.
There are to baeben. 1 yellow statue is a kid and it has a red head.
About Me
Kia ora, My name is April. I am in Year 4. Whaea Heather is my teacher. I like donuts and cake with ice cream. I like Animal Jam and touch. I have one brother called Katene and a mum called Paula and a dad called David. I am in the bilingual class at Hornby Primary SChool and I learn how to speak Te Re Maori.
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