I was close to the forest so i want there but mum or dad and my friend’s did not No i was going there.
I went to the forest. I was lost then but i keep going.Then i see a house!! “I have to go in there”so..
I did “AHHHHHHHHHHHH” I have to leave now wait.. I can’t I have no food and water fine i will
keep going so I want up spears yay I find food and water yemey. I went outside and i see people
they said “hElLo HeHeHeHeHe” ok why are u here? K i L l. Wait what.K i L l. Did u said kill.YeS.
Oh no I have to i leave now!!!! Oh No U dOn’T. Ok see u soon. HeHeHeHeHe. Mmmmmmmm
mmmmm. HaHaHaHaHaHa. The next day.where am i? HELLO no one is here
Wait is that u arabella and shyne ?yes.where am i?why are u scary said shyne.NO are u?Shhh some 1 is coming said arabella looking Scared. Wane some 1 comde we get scared but shyne was not scared.she said to the men *hi* See its a lie poop. Hey. hi u think i’m not here but i am NOW BIE .AAAAAAAAAAAAA. WAKE UP APRIL said shyne. What now.we are stuck now and i’m scared. Your the 1 how we get here but i have this. Wow said arabella. Thes get out of here. Yp. then we get out and I said where can we go? Oh u get the map said Arabella. oh ha i do let me see oh here it is. Mum dad i’m back. Ok said dad and mum . Thank reading my story. I went to the forest. I was lost then but i keep going.Then i see a house!! “I have to go in there”so..
I did “AHHHHHHHHHHHH” I have to leave now wait.. I can’t I have no food and water fine i will
keep going so I want up spears yay I find food and water yemey. I went outside and i see people
they said “hElLo HeHeHeHeHe” ok why are u here? K i L l. Wait what.K i L l. Did u said kill.YeS.
Oh no I have to i leave now!!!! Oh No U dOn’T. Ok see u soon. HeHeHeHeHe. Mmmmmmmm
mmmmm. HaHaHaHaHaHa. The next day.where am i? HELLO no one is here
Hello April.
ReplyDeleteWell done for writing a scary story.These are my least favourite stories to read. I did find it a little hard to read as there wasn't much punctuation.Just remember that when you write the word 'i', it needs to be a capital 'I'.